ESSAY 9

In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Many people believe that education is the only way that will enable someone to gain success in their life. However, it is not rare that teenager would like to start earlier to taste their own money. To pursue this, they would like to allocate some time for their job and, as a result, they are not fully dedicated to the education. In my opinion, it is a good idea to learn how to make money as long as parents give them enough supervision and education is still considered as important.

The advantage of the working experience is to make the teenager becomes more responsible and be better in their management skill. Time management and financial management are something that can only be possessed when there are pressures. Without these two abilities, it will be difficult for them when they have reached the phase of adulthood.

The disadvantage, however, may come in the forms of reduced exam scores and lack of interest in education. It is possible that after their first success in generating some amount of money, they will be more motivated to get more money than to care for their school. This can be a dangerous trend if parents do not supervise these teenager’s business activities.

Parents need to explain that when someone has already gained their basic education which is a bachelor degree, then they can choose to seriously work or to get more education. However, without a bachelor degree, it will be difficult to pursue further education. In fact, statistics have shown that people with a university degree, in general, have more income than those who are only graduated from secondary school.

To sum up, I think there is nothing wrong with a teenager trying to have a job. However, what most important are parents’ supervision and communication about education importance.


(Ini esai 20 menit - artinya fokus pada speed - dan belum diedit. Masih banyak kelirunya, tapi lumayan untuk latihan menuangkan ide.)

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